October Girl

I looooooooooove it!!!!

Thank you so much for the review hon. :D -Max

I liked this chapter I liked how you described the memories that backround. You also added some humor, which is very good. I loooooooved this chapter... sorry I can't be ...

NO! Do NOT I repeat do NOT read it!!! It's extremely stupid a 5th grader can writer better than that.... I CAN write better than that!

So shall I continue this? Or not?

I think I'm in love, I love this chapet as well as for the grammer and all the pretty things like that. I dunno. But yes, you should totally go ...

so just asking, should I continue this???

thanks so much for the crits, very helpful :D

eh, ah, hmm.... not sure exactly what to say about this... um.... yeah. Sorry I liked it, a little bit, but I'm so confused, sorry I can't be much help.... ...

This is ok, it starts slowing down, but then again that's just me. Sorry Anyways, I think this is going very slow and I'm lready yelling at the computer. If ...

um, well I'm guess you like nature, well, kid, so do I so high five! Well anyways I thought this poem shouts out GO green or don't go at all, ...

Love the poem! (but Circle rhymes with purple) :wink:

HEY! Max here, thanks for the add, I love this picture. I love the saying and I think you and I are going to be awesome friends anyways enough about ...

Can I just say B E A U T I F U L???? lol great job I like it alot -Max

it was short, but what exactly did the title have to do with the story? Oh well carry on.